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Monday, September 9, 2013

assignment prose


The Story
La Ndoke-ndoke Te Manu

                 Once upon a time, there lived a monkey and a cock. They were friends. The monkey lived near by the cock. One day, they took a walk. They enjoyed the walk very much. It makes them forgot the time. When they realize, the sun was already about to set. Then the monkey realized that he hadn’t eat anything since morning. He suddenly felt very hungry. At the time, there was no food around them. The monkey could only see the cock as a food for him. Then he catch the cock. He took away the cock’s feather. Lucky for the cock, he was strong enough to escape from the monkey. He ran away from the monkey. He went to his best friend, a crape. In the crape’s house, he told the crape what the monkey had done to him. The crape then help him to grew back his feather. The cock couldn’t accept what the monkey had done to him. He wanted to take a revenge on him. He told the crape about his willing. They decided to make a plan for the monkey. They planned to make a boat from land. They wanted to invite the monkey to go with them to the island across the sea. They will told the monkey that there’s a lot of fruits in that island. When he got the invitation, the monkey was very happy. He thought that he would get many fruits in that island, while his two friends would just watch him eat the fruits because they couldn’t climb tree. In the mean day, the cock, together with his best friend and the monkey, went to the island. In the middle of the sea, the cock perforated the floor of the boat. When the boat was field of water and was about to sink, the cock fly to the sea shore. The crape jumped into the sea and swam to the land. The poor monkey couldn’t fly nor swim. So he died in the middle of the sea. 
                                                                                               

Intrinsic Unsure
1.       Theme
The story is about friendship and loyality.

2.       Characters
Ø  The Monkey
Monkey has a characteristic of greedy. He is selfish and a little bit stupid. He is also careless. As we can see in the text, the monkey was only care about his food. Even he almost kill his friend for food.
Ø  The Cock
The cock was a picture of fairness. He was a typical of a good one. However, he wouldn’t let anyone to do anything to him. He wouldn’t just take it when someone did anything bad to him.
Ø  The Crape
The Crape was a picture of a good friend but not a very good friend. A good friend should have told his friend not to do anything bad to other person, or in this case to other animal, even in the name of “revenge”.

3.       Setting
The setting of the place of the story was in the wood near the sea shore. Monkey is an animal that generally lived in the wood and a crape is normally lived near the sea or in the sea shore. The time of the events in the story mostly in the day and afternoon.

4.       Point of view
The point of view that the author used to write the story is the “first person”.
5.       Plot
The story can be classified into some part. The first part was the exposition. In this part the author introduce the characters of the story. In the summary above the exposition was in the first and the second sentence. The next part of the plot is the rising action or conflict. The conflict started when the monkey tried to eat the cock. The next part is the climax of the story. The climax is when the cock told the crape about what happened to him and planned to take a revenged. The falling action was when the cock and the crape invited the monkey to go to another island. The denouement of the story was the end of the story. That was when the monkey died in the middle of the sea.

6.       Impression
What happened among the characters in the story is actually a reality in a real society. In the story, the monkey intended to kill his friend for eating. In real society we would find a man/woman betrayed or even kill his friend for money, job, authority, or woman.

7.       Message
What we could learn from this story is that we can’t underestimate someone because he couldn’t do the thing we could. We should never forget that everybody has their own ability.




REFERENCES

Story by : Lismun
Age             : 27th , Civil Servant

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